Commentry for Chapter Two - "Broken Hearts, Lost Dreams" - Cover[Saturday, November 2, 2002 @ 3:46 PM] posted by WolfBoy |
With this chapter, we started to add in the "angst". We got to delve into Peter's and Adrian's pasts a little (mostly Peter's).
The one thing I'd change about this cover artistically would be to vary the line thicknesses a little more than I did. It just seems a little flat as it it.
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![]() Commentry for Chapter Two - "Broken Hearts, Lost Dreams" - Cover[Saturday, November 2, 2002 @ 3:45 PM] posted by Kendrian |
I’ve never really liked chapter 2. It didn’t come out the way I wanted it to. I was having trouble writing, because I didn’t like the plot we had created, and I wasn’t sure how to proceed. It would be 2 years and a large amount of time off before I eventually started writing the story I wanted to tell. In the end, I got heavily influenced by Joss Whedon’s brilliant TV show Angel, it’s themes of loss and redemption.
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