Commentry for Chapter One - "Our Saga Begins..." - Page 19[Wednesday, October 30, 2002 @ 3:46 PM] posted by WolfBoy |
Finally the first of our female cast arrives - Veronica Morgenstern. The pose is based of off a page from the Spider-Man: Blue mini-series. I had some issues with the female form though - hence the linebacker shoulders and corset waist.
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![]() Commentry for Chapter One - "Our Saga Begins..." - Page 19[Wednesday, October 30, 2002 @ 3:45 PM] posted by Kendrian |
“Veronica Morgenstern” is actually a pseudonym for a real girl in my life when I was in High School who did a number on me. I was still raw about it when I wrote her, and it turned out to be very cathartic. So cathartic in fact, that I decided I didn’t want to finish the story. This remains one of those plot threads that got left, just hanging. I was going to wrap them up in the unfinished story. She was originally to be the third member of the Black Triumvirate, even though here name isn’t Black. They were supposed to be serving the main villain, Gene’s evil twin (goatee and all), but I scratched that because it was kind of lame. I got to the point where I couldn’t write such a stupid story line. I wanted to do something deeper.
Gene was based on our friend Fran, who had a twin brother, Mike, thus where the idea of Gene’s evil twin came from. The villain would eventually become what was sup[posed to be a minor villain, Kuniko’s evil cousin, originally to be the proprietor of a Japanese Kendo Ryu dojo, I eventually made him the leader of a Zaibatsu. Gabriel was to become the leader of it’s American branch, veronica his Girlfriend, and it was all going to be an elaborate plot, centered on Kuniko, her father, his Dojo, and Adrian. I don’t want to give it all away, because I am summarizing it.
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