Wednesday, September 25, 2002
Chapter One - "Our Saga Begins..." - Page 12


Commentary for Chapter One - "Our Saga Begins..." - Page 12


[Wednesday, September 25, 2002 @ 3:46 PM]
posted by WolfBoy

Adrian is an otaku. And sometimes the line between reality and anime blur for him. This is such a time. For those that can't tell, He's talking like Kenshin in the seventh panel.



Commentary for Chapter One - "Our Saga Begins..." - Page 12


[Wednesday, September 25, 2002 @ 3:45 PM]
posted by Kendrian

I never liked this one either. The dialogue just came off as stale. I was feeling writer’s block when I wrote this, and in retrospect, should have edited it. Though it was decent foreshadowing for an event that never happened.